2020届高中三年级英语专项训练专题十2、短文改错议论，应用类专练
短文改错（每题1分，共40分）
假定英语课上老师需要同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者不计分。
A（考试知识点29易）
Should students make friends online? Some people think of so. They believe that the Internet helps students make many friends. Chatted考试知识点08 online, students can express their feelings and opinions more freely, and even get some help of考试知识点03 their foreign languages. But others think quite differently. They insist making friends online is 考试知识点01 waste of time, that 考试知识点10 should otherwise be spent on study. Besides, it is often reported that quite a little考试知识点06 students get cheated online. It is my opinion what考试知识点11 we students should place our study, health and safety first. As for friendship, we can readily find them考试知识点02 in our classmates and other people around us. If someone cannot even be friend 考试知识点04 with the people around him, how can he possible 考试知识点06 expect a friend online?
B（考试知识点29易）
Smart phone apps certainly make our life easier. And now, it looks like they could even do our homework for us. Recent years have seen the release of a various 考试知识点04 of study aid apps aimed at student考试知识点04. Most of these apps allow users to take a photo of our考试知识点02 schoolwork and the correct answers will just appear on their smartphones. Convenient 考试知识点14 they are, these apps present problems with 考试知识点03 both parents and teachers. Most students just copy the answers from the app, while only a few use the app to study. Better 考试知识点06 still, some students even use the study aid apps as social networks. Therefore考试知识点06, this isn’t to say that study aid apps should be completely ban考试知识点08. Parents and teachers should give necessary guidance to help students to take the advantage of the study aid apps’ strengths and avoiding考试知识点12 their weaknesses.
C（考试知识点30易）
Dear Jeremy and Alice,
Although we've been delighted to have you as neighbors, we're hoping to settle something that bothers to us. In a word, your dog—Cleo.
We've called several time 考试知识点04 about Cleo's early morning barking. It is difficult to understanding考试知识点08 why she barks every minute she's outside. The early morning barking have考试知识点05 been disturbing us as we are often up all night with the baby. Beside考试知识点06, Cleo tends to bark a 考试知识点01 average of six hours a day. This morning she starts考试知识点09 barking even before 5 o'clock. That is too much for us, considering how closely考试知识点06 the houses are.
We appreciate our考试知识点02 apologies and goodwill, but we hope that you can figure考试知识点06 a good way of settling the matter.
Sincerely,
Jack and Rose
D（考试知识点30易）
Dear schoolmates,
In order to get high school students to attaching考试知识点08 importance to the environment and raise our awareness to protect the environment, and China Daily is planning to hold an interest 考试知识点06 knowledge contest. A 考试知识点01 contest starts on October 14th and end 考试知识点05 on 31st. Remember, you can take the contest in China Daily newspaper, that 考试知识点10 is very popular among high school student考试知识点04. The answer sheet must考试知识点07 cut from the newspaper and sent to China Daily after 考试知识点03/13 the deadline.
Please pay more attention to the related information of the contest and take an active part in them on time.
Students’ Union
语法填空（每题1.5分，共54分）
阅读下面短文，在空白处填入1个适合的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。
（1）
TCM, or Traditional Chinese Medicine, is a profound pathway to create the life you truly want to live and the life you were born to live. It’s a timeless bridge, ___1___考试知识点10 can start and support ___2___ 考试知识点04 in every life dimension—physical, mental and emotional.
TCM has an ancient but completely modern healing system and it has the power to unlock your true potential and help you develop and use your own unique talents. ___3___ 考试知识点02 wisdom and ability to understand individual health needs empowers each person with a way ___4___ 考试知识点08 body, mind and spirit-the foundation for lasting and authentic health. TCM teaches you how to live ___5___ 考试知识点01 balanced and harmonious life.
It’s true ___6___ 考试知识点11 TCM is one of the oldest healing systems on the planet. It has ___7___ 考试知识点06 been in continuous practice for thousands of years. How can something so old still work for people living today?
TCM can ___8___ 考试知识点09 to help heal anyone no matter what year it is because it’s rooted in unchanging natural law, which has its source beyond time. The unique medicine grew out of ___9___ 考试知识点09 carefully how everything in reality functions at the deepest, invisible levels and interacts with the surface or visible physical levels. It’s the medicine of extraordinary relationships. Every TCM principle ___10___ 考试知识点05 and harmonizes with the relationships that exist within natural law.
（2）
When I was 14, I decided to make some pocket money by 1. 考试知识点08（help） Mr. Miller cut the grass in his garden. I worked hard because that was my first part-time job, 2. 考试知识点10 is important to me. After working for one week, Mr. Miller said that he had no money for me. That surprised me 3. ___ 考试知识点06（great). I argued with him, and then I went back home in anger. My parents told me not to be angry 4. 考试知识点03 Mr. Miller because 5. 考试知识点02 was in difficulties. Then my mother called up Mr. Miller and they talked about something on 6. 考试知识点01 phone. A few days later, my mother asked me to return to Mr. Miller’s garden because he was too weak 7. 考试知识点08（look）after it．
When I came back, Mr. Miller said, “Sorry, I’ve no money, 8. 考试知识点12 I can do something for you.” He played a CD for me. Hearing the beautiful music, I was so interested in it that I 9. 考试知识点05/09（forget） the money and did the work with pleasure. At last, Mr. Miller gave me a ticket to a concert.
After that, I became very fond of music. Now I’m one of the most popular 10.___ 考试知识点04（sing） in our country. I can never thank Mr. Miller too much.
（3）
My interest in Chinese food started years ago，when I was a young reporter for the Washington Post．Our office wasn't far from Chinatown，___1___ 考试知识点10 I found some very good Chinese restaurants．
That was the first time that I___2___ 考试知识点09（notice） the fresh taste of the meat and vegetables of Chinese food．
When I learned more about the food，I began to understand why___3___考试知识点02 has this special feature．
Many years ago，china had___4___ 考试知识点01 energy crisis because it lost much of its wood due to over population and poor management of its forests．This___5___考试知识点04（lose） was very bad for the country，of course，but it turned out to be very good for the food．Wood became very expensive and hard to get，so the Chinese had to either find a substitute for their___6___ 考试知识点06（value） wood，or learn how to use it better．There weren't any substitutes so people found ways to economize．
In order to economize in cooking，they had to use very little wood．So they started cutting their meat and vegetables___7___ 考试知识点03 small pieces before they put them in the hot oil．That way，the food cooked___8___ 考试知识点06（fast） and they saved more fuel．The food___9___考试知识点08 （prepare） in this way kept its fresh flavor﹣﹣﹣and it's this flavor___10___ 考试知识点14 attracts people from other countries to the art of Chinese cooking．
8、阅读下面短文,在空白处填入1个适合的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。
Positive thinking does not mean you have to find every idea absolutely wonderful.
It ①__________考试知识点09 mean you have to be ready to explore an idea and to try and bring out whatever good features it has .The next step might be to find the ②__________考试知识点04 in the idea and to try and strengthen them, rather than use them ③__________考试知识点06 as an excuse for rejecting the whole idea. Finally, the idea, after it ④__________考试知识点09 , may not be used because there is a ⑤__________考试知识点06 one or because, good ⑥__________ 考试知识点14 it is, it is not suitable. There is ⑦__________考试知识点02 wrong with being positive about an idea at first and then ⑧__________考试知识点08 it later, when you see that it won’t work.
It is easy to be negative and critical and too much talent is wasted in negative thinking. It is time we ⑨__________考试知识点07 less respect for this kind of destructive thinking and focused ⑩__________考试知识点03 positive thinking more. So remember to think positively.
参考答案
1、短文改错
A、答案： Should students make friends online? Some people think of so. They believe that the Internet helps students make many friends. 
online, students can express their feelings and opinions more freely, and even get some help 
their foreign languages. But others think quite differently. They insist making friends online is 
waste of time, 
should otherwise be spent on study. Besides, it is often reported that quite a 
students get cheated online. It is my opinion 
we students should place our study, health and safety first. As for friendship, we can readily find 
in our classmates and other people around us. If someone cannot even be 
with the people around him, how can he 
expect a friend online?
（2）答案： Smart phone apps certainly make our life easier. And now, it looks like they could even do our homework for us. Recent years have seen the release of a of study aid apps aimed at 
. Most of these apps allow users to take a photo of 
schoolwork and the correct answers will just appear on their smartphones. Convenient 
they are, these apps present problems 
both parents and teachers. Most students just copy the answers from the app, while only a few use the app to study. 
still, some students even use the study aid apps as social networks. 
, this isn’t to say that study aid apps should be completely 
. Parents and teachers should give necessary guidance to help students to take the advantage of the study aid apps’ strengths and 
their weaknesses.
分析：
1. 句意:近年来,发布了各种各样针对学生的学习应用软件。 固定搭配:a variety of各种各样的,故把various改为variety。
2. 泛指所有些学生用可数名词复数形式,故把student改为students。
3. 句意:这类应用程序中的大部分都允许用户拍摄他们的作业照片,而正确的答案将会出目前他们的智能手机上。应该是“他们的”用代词their,故把our改为their。
4. 句意:尽管这类应用程序很便捷。尽管as/though,引导让步状语从句,把作表语的形容词放在句首,故在they前面加as/though。
5. 句意:但它们给父母和老师都带来了问题。固定搭配:present something to somebody 把......呈现给某人。
6. 句意:更糟糕的是,一些学生甚至将学习应用软件作为社交互联网。worse更糟糕的,故把Better改为Worse。
7. 句意:然而,这并非说学习应用软件应该完全禁止。然而 however,表示转折,故把Therefore改为However。
8. 应用是被禁止的,要用被动语态,故把ban改为banned。
9. 句意:父母和老师应该提供必要的指导,帮助学生借助学习应用软件的优势,防止他们的缺点。take advantage of借助, 不需要定冠词,故把the去掉。
10. And连接连个并列成分,take advantage of和avoid都作help to的宾语,故把avoiding改为avoid。
C、答案：
Dear Jeremy and Alice,
Although we've been delighted to have you as neighbors, we're hoping to settle something that bothers 
us. In a word, your dog—Cleo.
We've called several about Cleo's early morning barking. It is difficult to 
why she barks every minute she's outside. The early morning barking 
been disturbing us as we are often up all night with the baby. 
, Cleo tends to bark 
average of six hours a day. This morning she barking even before 5 o'clock. That is too much for us, considering how 
the houses are.
We appreciate apologies and goodwill, but we hope that you can figure 
a good way of settling the matter.
Sincerely,
Jack and Rose
D、答案：
Dear schoolmates,
In order to get high school students to 
importance to the environment and raise our awareness to protect the environment, and China Daily is planning to hold an 
knowledge contest. 
contest starts on October 14th and on 31st. Remember, you can take the contest in China Daily newspaper, 
is very popular among high school . The answer sheet must 
cut from the newspaper and sent to China Daily the deadline.
Please pay more attention to the related information of the contest and take an active part in on time.
Students’ Union
分析：
1.第一句 attaching→attach 考查非谓语动词。此处为动词不定式作目的状语，此处to是不定式的to，后面接动词原形，用attach。
2. 第一句 去掉China前面的and 考查连接词。逗号前面是目的状语，不是句子，因此无需连接词来连接，故去掉and。
3.第一句 interest→interesting 考查形容词。此处为形容词作定语，修饰后面的名词。
4. 第二句 A→The 考查冠词。此处contest是第二次出现，是特指，应用the。
5.第二句 end→ends考查主谓一致。此句中有连接词and，依据前后一致的原则，前面是谓语动词starts，用三单形式，故end也用三单形式，ends。
6. 第三句 that→which 考查关系代词。此处为非限制性定语从句，that不可以引导非限制性定语从句，从句缺少主语，指代前面China Daily newspaper，故用which。
7.第三句student→students 考查名词单复数。此处是指高中的学生们，应用复数。
8. 第四句must后加 be 考查语态。此处意思是答卷卡被剪下来，应用被动语态，而且must是情态动词，后接动词原形，故加be。
9.第四句after→before 考查连词。此处意为“在截止日期之前”，而不是之后，故用before。
10. 第五句 them→it 考查代词。此处是指参加这个竞赛，单数，故用it来代替。
2、语法填空
（1）答案：1. which 2. growth 3. Its 4. to unite 5. a 6. that 7. actually 8. be applied 9. observing 10. reflects
分析： 【1题解析】考查定语从句。此处为非限定性定语从句，先行词是a timeless bridge，关系词在从句中做主语，应用关系代词which引导。故填which。
【2题解析】考查名词。此处做start和support的宾语，意为“开始并支持成长”，应用名词。故填growth。
【3题解析】考查形容词性物主代词。此处指“它的智慧和能力”，应用形容词词性物主代词。故填Its。
【4题解析】考查不定式。此处指“有一种办法来统一身体、思想和精神——持久和真的的健康的基础”，way“方法，办法”，常用不定式做定语。故填to unite。
【5题解析】考查不定冠词。固定短语：live a…life“过着一种……的生活”。故填a。
【6题解析】考查主语从句。此处it是形式主语，真的的主语是后面的从句，从句不缺成分，应用只起连接用途的代词that引导。故填that。
【7题解析】考查副词。此处修饰动词been，应用副词形式。故填actually。
【8题解析】考查被动语态。句意：中医可以被应用于帮助治愈其他人。依据句意，此处应用被动语态。故填be applied。
【9题解析】考查目前分词。此处坐落于介词of后且表动作，应用目前分词。故填observing。
【10题解析】考查主谓一致。“every+名词单数”做主语时，谓语动词用第三人称单数形式。故填reflects。
（2）答案：
1．helping 2．which 3．Greatly 4．with 5．he 6．the 7．to look 8．but 9．forgot 10．singers
（3）答案：1. where 2. had noticed 4. it 4. an 5. loss 6. valuable 7. into 8. faster 9. prepared 10. that
分析：
【1题解析】where 此处Chinatown是先行词,在后面的非限制性定语从句中作地址状语,故填where。
【2题解析】had noticed 在That was the first time that...句型中,前面是was,所以从句中用过去完成时态,故填had noticed。
【3题解析】it 此处用it指代前面的the food。
【4题解析】an energy以元音开头,“不少年前中国有一个能源危机”,故填an。
【5题解析】loss 依据句意可知,此处缺主语,所以应该用名词形式,故填loss。
【6题解析】valuable 形容词修饰名词,故填valuable。
【7题解析】into 句意:把肉和蔬菜切成小块。依据句意可知填into。
【8题解析】faster 依据后面的more,可知此处用比较级,故填faster。
【9题解析】prepared 此处是过去分词作后置定语,故填prepared。
【10题解析】that 此处是强调句型,故填that。
（4）答案：does; weaknesses ; simply; has been explored; better; as/though; nothing; rejecting; showed; on
